Hello @irrisblooms
Lets review your work together shall we🌻🌻
Its an expressive poem indeed. It speaks of what you urge to have versus what was given yo you. Its hard to play the cards just right and sometimes it takes the body over many times before it hits the edge of return. Every human I can think of has experienced something like this before and it leaves lots of scars behind. You should be grateful that sometimes your body cuts that line for you instead of your heart and interest. Let me tell you something of great truth. This man, no this boy, he is nothing he had plenty of times to heal your wounds. To ease the pain that he put onto you. But even if so if the only way you can express the pain is through neetly composed words of a poem I will gladly read each and every one of them. I hope to read your works again soon!
Love
Anma
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