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This is a very informative essay. There's just a bit of nitpicking to do. You said "Unlike so many industry trainers who have not actually huge successful in MLM, yet they claim to be qualified to train to how to do it." This sentence is rather confusing I would suggest saying instead "Unlike so many industry trainers who have not had actual success in MLM, yet claim to be qualified to train others in it..."
Other than that, the grammar and spelling are both great.
You mentioned at the beginning that she has spent time on several advisory councils. Which ones? You could add a little more detail there. In that same sentence you had said that she was an accomplished network marketer. People may not know what that is. Maybe you could describe the job a little more, to get us interested.
Overall, it's a well put together paper!