Hi there! I know this is an older piece but just wanted to stop by and say; lovely poem - I enjoyed the light rhyming throughout too - it's easy to read but also seems sort of classical because of the regular rhythm of the lines.
I wonder if the period after the first "the moon" & "again" are intentional or a typo. It's an interesting way to punctuate things, that I don't dislike, but just took me by surprise a little bit. You might look for a more interesting word than "things" in stanza three as well.
I think the title is a great choice. I interpreted the poem in light of the title to be that the descriptions of the moon are all applied to a literal person in a metaphorical fashion.
Thanks for posting!
alliyah
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