i like the way you used (_) after a phrase. It was like he was saying the phrase and then thinking of the part in the (_). This really drew me in and is written nicely; however I have seen WAY too many of these peoms that compare live with a setting sun or a rising sun, but with all that said I still like this. I am a sucker for the mooshy love poems. Your GF with like this ^_^
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