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This was really powerful. I love the flow of it. I could visualize this being performed in a poetry slam with emotion in every word.
This tells the cold hard truth about real life. I admire this piece of work and consider it greatly beautiful. In a way, we all truly are blind to the world around us. Keep writing for the sake of writing and maintain your own beliefs if no one will listen to them.
I really like this!!! I'm going to have to re-read it over and over until I get everything thats in there, but thats what makes it so great!
that is all I can say:)
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