Hi there figmoon! I have a quick review for you! (disregard how disorganized this is, just a few thoughts of mine as I read)
"i started moving on before I learned to walk"
CHILLS! That line is an amazing start that sets a clear scene for readers. It also provides insight into how the 'journey' of this poem began and is quite easy to build on; awesome job!
In addition, throughout the entire poem you utilize beautiful imagery which paints an amazing picture, especially in the line: "carve myself into a hollow sculpture"!
I wondered why you structured your lines the way they are? Is there a specific way you chose when to go to the next line, because I do not see any clear pattern?
Moving on, I absolutely ADORED the way you symbolized brokenness and healing throughout this poem, specifically in the line: "i do not know how to heal properly, only to be minimized to broken bones and beg for a revival"
Your ending was also beautiful, painting an amazing picture of how you will deal with this; enacting your own personal resolution, even if it may not be the best of options. Your last sentence also seems to wrap up the loose ends and serves as a chilling, yet sorrowful ending.
Overall, this poem was absolutely beautiful and gave me soooo many feels. Have a nice day and keep writing! <3