Young Writers Society

Hello! Happy Review day and happy holidays!

This was a very sweet poem about your younger brother. It was heartfelt, and you poured your love into making sure that he was happy and safe. To be honest, I thought that the first two paragraphs were part of the poem, like prose. But it serves as a good introduction into the actual poem.

I love how the poem transitions into imagery. The snow shows how you and your other siblings will always look out for your little brother in tough times.

Me, my brothers and sisters walked first

Our footprints left behind, each time larger

so the following could tread easier,

Hello!

Thank you for sharing!

I like how you added some background on the people in your poem (I'm not sure if this is real life, or if you're basing this off one of your existing characters, but either way, this is marvelous).

I kind of wish you described how they look, I was trying to imagine them in my brain, but at the same time your adjectives used to describe their personality traits was enough for me to picture how you all interact with each other.

The last line really touched me:

My youngest little brother is the best

because we've made sure he'll never get cold.

this is lovely! you are such an amazing writer. the whole thing is so poetic! <3