This is really good , I like that it leaves things up for interpretation enough to think about it but it isn't so vague that it seems like there is no point to it . Is it just me or does wise woman seem like a controlling motherly figure, that's just what I got from it but that just goes to show the different ways of seeing this which I think grants to it's depth.
Personally I think a 3.5/5 or a 4/5 if you wanna put a number on it. I think breaking it up into stanza's and then putting emphasis on different things in those may have been more efficient, but honestly It's really good as is and I'd struggle writing something this well. I just wanna give you something that I think may help.
Have a good day pal, and good job!
Points: 60
Reviews: 4
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