Erica Frischkorn aims on providing vibrant skills to her students as she has an exceptional skill set and great knowledge of her subject, which has been increased her excellent academic background. She received her Bachelor's degree in French and English Honors from McMaster University, Hamilton, ON in 2009. Later, she finished her Bachelor of Education in French, English, and Special Education from Queen's University, Kingston, ON.
She also has experience in the field of teaching French to the students of both Grade 6 and 7 in Mississauga, ON, using Advanced Integration Method (AIM). Erica Frischkorn focused at improving oral communication by leading class discussions and analyzing related texts. Apart from this, she also taught English to Grade 12 students and enhanced student's interest in reading comprehension with the help of differentiated instruction and problem based learning. She has also been honored as the Ontario Certified teacher by the Council of the Ontario College of Teachers.
She has been a volunteer teacher in Naples, FL., and helped students in literacy days and student field trips. She is a highly compassionate and responsible personality who is also a strong believer that contributing to the society is giving back to society. She involves herself in numerous community activities and has also worked as a Student Ambassador in Hamilton, ON, where she helped students in their academic endeavors.
Her seriousness, determination, and dedication has build her very capable to achieve a scholarship from the Florida Canada Linkage Institute. In her career, Erica proved herself as excellent English and French teacher who has made her students learn with her immense knowledge. She taught French to Grade 9 students at a school in Napanee, ON. Besides this, Erica Frischkorn is a member of the Golden Key International Society.
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Your grammar and spelling are impeccable, so we can skip that part.
Your writing is detailed without being too self-involved. I feel like we got to know enough about Erica to pique our interests, but not too much to be boring. It reads rather like a cover letter for a resume, highlighting the high points in her life very effectively.
If you want to add a bit more human interest, something to let us connect to her, maybe add a paragraph in there about her more personal side. What are her goals? Does she have children of her own? While not necessary, it would be nice to see a more human angle.
Overall, this was a well-written, neatly put together article!
Ha, so two works about Erica Frischkorn? She must be a person on the rise to fame, no? ^^
Anyways, shall we begin?
I found no nitpicks, so clearly this is a good article/essay that has a lot of time and effort put into it. As the last work I reviewed, this one also holds a steady flow with a clean portray of words that slip and slide easily through my mind. No confusion, no doubt! I do nothing but admire the simplicity of your words as they travel downward.
This is very short and simple and that's why I liked it so much. It was very informative and I feel like you got a lot of your facts right. As I said in my last review, you should weasel in a concluding paragraph to give this more of a finalized and whole feeling, so I suggest reiterating the whole main idea of this article/essay and including a bit of current and personal information about Erica: where she lives, if she's married, if she has any kids, her age, etc. Maybe any personal projects she is currently working on. Whatever floats your goat!
Overall, this was nicely written! Very informative, very simple and to the point, and easy to read while you're at it. Nice work.