hi envy!i always jump at the chance to review your poetry! it's rare for poems to really hit me anymore, yknow? but yours typically does that.
i have been trying to make peace with some of what i need to let go of
it all sits in my heart -the places i go to when i think about the end,a rocking chair on a quiet porch & your bedsheets from last october, still with the tag on
change is not victory, vice versai want to become all that i dont understand yet i want shared custody of the versions of us we bore together
Hello! ^_^Wow!! Your voice is really really unique!! I've never read a poem like this before!! I love the nonchalant tone here and I'd think this is a heartbreak poem?? "I want shared custody of the versions of us we bore together" makes me think that way because it feels very reminiscent of the past!! If I had to describe the poem's vibe in one word, it would be "brooding" but in a good way Also the use of & is really cool too!! Some of the lines get a lil clunky though cus of it I think, but don't worry!! That isn't a bad thing!! Some parts just feel like a mouthful when I read them aloud is all. In a way that works for your stream of consciousness type of writing!! Just something I noticed... Keep writing please!!Veda <3
Uhm, hi, can you stop writing such amazing poetry? It inspires me too much! But seriously, you’re crazy talented. I love your work
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