Hey, dwyn!
This is an amazing piece. I liked how you started the poem with slow pace, it felt pleasant by reading this line:
everything feels okay, and that's because
that's how everything feels with you.
The affection for the respective person was well engraved.
you've been my healer and breaker
since the moment i let you in
The speaker has stated that her belovedholds manual to her heart. And breathing the shards of glass when they are intimate and his absence coughing them back.
These were great lines, so intense. I enjoyed reading it.
Could see the potential in you, keep up the awesome writing! Looking forward for more of your works.
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