Salutations, dropout.
Wow. I saw finale and I thought it was going to be long! XD I suppose not, you have to stick to what you've been doing.rhe title does have a sense of finality, though.
That's a really sweet closing stanza, and it does a good job of summing up and pulling together most of the other poems in this "series". I think this is the first time you've used no capitalisation at all! Pretty cool, and a nice style choice for this line, simplistic stanza.
The only thing I have a slight problem with is the italics. What is the point? They can't be used as emphasis if everything is emphasised. Other than that, everything looks good.
It was pretty nice and fun to read through your poems, and here we are now at the end. I like how they were a pretty simple and short, although I think some could've had more of a focus or point. I hope you continue writing!
Farewell,
-Falco
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