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I think this is a really unique concept and is very good!
Only one small nitpick
‘With’ needs to be capitalised.
I must say, this is a beautiful poem. It’s a very good length and is to the point. The subject is rarely written about!
How did you come up with the idea?
Wow. This gave me shivers.
"I should have caught the syllables in a jar
and pickled them till summer"
Is going to be stuck in my head for a long time.
I have one suggestion for change: put a line break in the sixth line between "open" and "the." It will scan better.
You have quite a talent. Very nice.
this is really good.I am really impressed by your style of writing.....i will remember this for quite some time
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