Hi there Writer! Thought I'd fly over a quick review!! (I'm a little late but a review nonetheless!! ヾ(≧▽≦*)o)
First, I want to state how beautifully you capture the essence of love and connection. Your imagery of "imagining oneself into the softness" of someone really evokes a sense of intimacy and tenderness. also the gentle touches and exploration of the partner's curls gives us a sense of wonder and appreciation for the beauty found in such tender moments!
Your poem also delves into the universal human desire to seek and chase meaningful connections, highlighting the limited and infinite nature of these moments. Your message towards loving someone harder or for the rest of one's life is such a powerful and beautiful testament to the depth of the person's emotions and the intensity of the connection they feel towards their partner.
Overall, your poem was wonderfully written! I felt such a happy, and calming sensation while reading this!! Well done <3
Fly high Writer, Cupid.
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