Published November 2, 2009
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I really, really liked these lyrics!! I don't think it would be in a genre I usually listen to, but loved it anyway
it made me wanna get out of my chair and scream it to the whole world ^_^
Hi, The song would last 5 minutes at the least in run-time as it is a slow grinding metal song, the lyrics are done in a deep dragged out gutteral style as seen with 'Gorefest'.
The guitar work is B tuning, so very low and grunting/grinding.
Each line takes at least 10 seconds to vocally perform.
Hello, BogWraith: I am a song writer myself. I really like the theme of the song, but I can't get the pitch of the song, because I don't know what Genre it is. Maybe if you were to state the genre in the song (at the top) I would understand the rhythm of the song more. Also, the song is pretty short, that would only last about 1 1/2 Minutes in run time. Otherwise I'd like to say that just for seven minutes you did pretty good.