Published October 5, 2006
Knuckle Drag'r
-Slick Jimmy
Pretty pretty,
in fishnet stockings.
Non-stick tape;
will help the tuck-ins.
A drink and smoke helps the day turn to night.
A little bit more makes the world seem right.
Walk me down the runway to show me the light.
Dont call me knuckle drag'r, but little Ms. Bright....
LIES!
Silly Silly,
in self made gallows.
Stage face chased;
by five o'clock shadows.
A drink and smoke helps the day turn to night.
A little bit more makes the world seem right.
Walk me down the runway to show me the light.
Dont call me knuckle drag'r, but little Ms. Bright....
LIES!
Dreamy Dreamy,
of white picket fences.
Walls of truth;
distort your true senses.
A drink and smoke helps the day turn to night.
A little bit more makes the world seem right.
Walk me down the runway to show me the light.
Dont call me knuckle drag'r, but little Ms. Bright....
LIES!
Glamour Glamour,
when places go dark.
Lay in mess;
Pick at the track mark.
A drink and smoke helps the day turn to night.
A little bit more makes the world seem right.
Walk me down the runway to show me the light.
Dont call me knuckle drag'r, but little Ms. Bright....
LIES!
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This was a quick hit. I wish I had more of a variety in the chorus, but I simply dont have a full grasp of that part of society to be as exact as needed. (and I am not in the mood to research it.) But feel that the subject matter, and the words used are approiate for lyrics. Perhaps one day I may research and come up with a kick-ass poem.
This came about when I saw a picture of a friend that dressed as a french maid for halloween a few years back and it was disturbing. 310lb italian does NOT make for a sexy french maid. haha.
This reminds me of Seether lyrics which is great because to me they are extremely talented music writers. (Of course that is if they write there own stuff, which I'm pretty sure they do.)
Since I'm not one to critique poetry or lyrics of any kind, I'll have to say that I can't find anything to change because it really is nice work!
As always,
POKE