Catherine~ A Mystery Set During the French Revolution

by darksleuth64
  • October 27, 2006
  • Short Story
  • Historical Fiction

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Poor Imp
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Poor Imp wrote a review · Mon Oct 30, 2006 10:32 pm

Hullo Darksleuth. Spacing--though not a difficulty in printed books--makes rather more difference on the forums.

It's almost impossible to read all that text bunched together. Space it out, double?

It had a dramatically bleak beginning, and I liked the use of short sentences in between to pace. I'll be back to look over it if you'll do me the favour of making it more legible. ^_^


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Firestarter
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Firestarter commented · Fri Oct 27, 2006 8:22 pm

*moved to Historical Fiction*



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