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by darkdove
  • November 29, 2007
  • Poetry
  • Other

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Hetzie
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Hetzie wrote a review · Thu Nov 29, 2007 6:43 pm

Very good, I am liking very much :D Unusual structure but I think that makes it stand out more so, and place the emphasis on the whole forbidden.
Keep it up 8)

Hetzie xx



'Tis the season to shovel enormous amounts of watermelon into your mouth while hunched over the cutting board like a dehydrated vampire that hasn't fed on blood in four hundred years and the only viable substitute is this questionable Christmas-colored fruit.
— Ari11