Published November 27, 2007
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Your poem was very deep and thoughtful. It was very good.
The only thing you need to do, is add puncuation, and capitlize. It made it difficult to read. Which i found sad, because this poem has alot of potential.
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well this is interesting. I never read a poem like this before. I like it. I enjoyed it very much, continue your work.