Hello!
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I quite enjoy this actually, especially the last few lines- it creates an intimate, nostalgic feel which adds a layer of personal experiences over this richly written poem. I love the persona's yearning for innocence and possibly bliss again, as is implied in the line "think every golden patch in the sky is the sun', that hit home for me.
Keep writing!
Emilia
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