What was hidden
one look scars revealed
two looks emotions displayed
more was not needed to be see the cracks
that were in her
hidden beneath a layer
you should slowly peel it away
see what is beneath it
drink up those feelings
make them believe it
let them not see it
come one command those feelings
but you are weak
free her
steel them away
let the night lay its claim
let the tears stop raining
she is done falling
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