Hope

by chazzer
  • May 16, 2010
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Blift
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Blift wrote a review · Mon May 17, 2010 4:37 pm

Well, the poem was quite bland, but I am not jealous. I didn't really understand it but...

And I won't be a lying cheat

because my heart skips to a different beat.


I think that's the best line, even thought it doesn't make sense

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ArahniaSiddel
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ArahniaSiddel commented · Mon May 17, 2010 3:23 pm

ummmmmm . . . . I can't really comment on the poem. But, what you said before the poem was awful. Please use complete words. :) Thankyou
A. S.



I took a deep breath and listened to the old brag of my heart; I am, I am, I am.
— Sylvia Plath