Hi there! I'm Orabella, here with a review. ^^
What an interesting poem! I love how much is left to interpretation and imagination. Such a short poems have lots of questions left unanswered, which keeps the reader thinking about it long after!
I like the repetition of the word, "so." It greater defines how much or many there is of a thing or thought, with "so" literally being said many times!
Your first two lines describe a place where things are written down, and the next two describe more about them without actually saying they don't have anything written in them, which I think is really clever. "So little words" refers to the notebooks having nothing in them, if my guess is correct? It personally makes me think of my own stack of blank notebooks in my house. XD
I love the ending. The fact that "feel" is present tense and "knew" is past tense makes me think that the narrator can still feel the things from a while ago, and that they thought they knew "them", but they didn't really? Or am I digging too deep into this?
The last line is interesting, although I wonder exactly what it means? In your way of what? Is it literal, where it got in the way of writing? Or is it more metaphorical? And what exactly got in their way? Was it feeling in and knowing them? Or something outside of the poem?
Is the title "Empty" referring to the state of the notebooks? Or is it referring to the feelings of the narrator?
That was a lot of questions, none of which you have to answer. That's just me being speculative, I suppose.
Although it was very short, I really enjoyed reading this! I hope you'll write more?
Let me know if there's anything I can do for you, and please keep writing!
Have an amazing day/night.
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