Crazy

Time for a Black Cat Review!!

MEOW! Hello, friend! My name is Ellie and today I will be reviewing using my very own Black Cat Review Method! It is very similar to the incredible YWS S'more Method but I have Halloween-ified it and made it spooky! My little black cat friend, Vladimir, wants to offer his opinion on your amazing literary piece:

Mystical Witch Hat - What I See, Observe, and Interpret

This is a very short, honest, and personal poem. I love how short it was and how you got your point across really fast. I like the topic you chose to write about.

Ridiculous

That’s what

I call it

I think we will leave it at that!

I can sense that this person really drives you crazy, a lot! And using that emotion to write poetry is a great way to share your feelings, so awesome work.

Vladimir’s Advice - Suggestions for Improvement

And you know it to

This should be 'too' instead of too. I think you could also remove the word And to help it flow better, since it does not seem like it is a continuation of the previous sentence.

One way that I think this poem could be imp[roved is by sharing more personal details- why emotions are you feeling and what do they feel like in your body? Who is this person and why are they important to you? Why are they making you crazy? Physical details like descriptions of appearance or countenance?

Jack O’Lanterns - My Favourite Parts and Praises

I love the topic that you chose to write about. I really do like the simple formatting and language you used as well. It is easy to follow along and not too complicated.

I loved this ending line as well:

I think we will leave it at that!

Black Cat Cuddles - Concluding Ideas and Thoughts

Awesome writing! Keep going, can't wait to read more of what you write. And also, a late welcome to YWS

Your friend,
Ellie

I hope you have a spook-tastical day, filled with black cat mischief!