Published July 29, 2012
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"When something has always been the case,
but the title just didn't seem to fit.
It just needs realising.
When it's there staring you in the face,
It needs embracing.
But clutching,(Since this is a poem after a coma you should indent)
fumbling is easier.
Delicate matters need balancing,
Delicate matters need practising.
So when eyes and words,
And words and words contrast. (To me you said words to much)
Then the dressing and the time,()
it won't help."
It might be me but I don't get this poem. It is called Procrastination but I don't get how that fits with the poem. Um if you could explain that then mabey it would make a little bit more understandable. It was a nice poem
It's a lyrical thing. I feel dumb, ok so don't indent, there is no need. sorry.