Published August 1, 2012
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You describe things so well - the sea, the shells, the people - in a way that interconnects each thing to the next. I'm not a religious person so religious-y stories tend to kind of scare me away, but in any case this was very well-written if nothing else. I think this has the potential to really become a great story.
Keep writing,
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