Good afternoon Avian! It's officially February 1st and you know what that means!! It's Valentines month! So to go along with Valentines...I thought I'd do a Cupid's review! Let's dive into your poem, shall we? Cupid's got her love arrows ready, and I'm excited to share my thoughts, Cupid style—consider it a love letter to your verses! 
❤️ First Impression: Love at First Verse
Oh, sweet soul, your words hit me like a cupid's arrow straight to the heart! The imagery of the sun bidding adieu, its orange blood splattering the sky—pure poetic brilliance! Those tears in the sky, carving through like love notes from the heavens—talk about an enchanting entrance. It's like the universe itself is serenading the art of love. <3
🩶 Room for Improvements: Cupid's Guidance
The white lines carving through the sky, making way for twilight's gentle intrusion, evoke a sense of transition and change. It's a delicate dance, but delving deeper into the emotional nuances behind this celestial choreography could add an extra layer of richness. What emotions stir within the poet as dusk and dawn engage in their eternal struggle?
💛 Highlights of Piece: Cupid's Shooting Stars
Your verses are like a serenade to the silence of love in the cosmos. The day's graceful descent, God poking holes in the sky—it's like a slow dance in the universe! And that moon, waxing and waning in its celestial waltz—absolute romantic vibes. Well done Avian!
💖 Favorite Lines: Cupid's Love-struck Arrows
"Every death I find here, every carcass left to rot, even the last threads of life clinging to the sun."
This line is a love note to the universe itself! The recognition of every sacrifice, every thread of life, is like Cupid's arrow hitting the bullseye of cosmic empathy. A poetic masterpiece!
"I will witness it all and I will not let any sacrifice be lost to the crumbling shelves of memory."
This vow is Cupid-approved commitment! Your determination to preserve every sacrifice against the ravages of forgetfulness is a testament to your poetic stewardship. A celestial promise well made! q(≧▽≦q)
🩷 Closing Thoughts: Cupid's Cosmic Applause
Like all writings, we must sadly come to an end. Your poem is a celestial sonata, a symphony of cosmic marvels conducted with eloquence! The blend of vivid imagery and philosophical undertones creates a mesmerizing tapestry of emotions. Keep pouring your heart into it—Your writing was amazing as always! I hope to read more from you in the future. (´▽`ʃ♡ƪ)
Fly high writer, Cupid 💘
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