Hello FlamingPhoenix here with a few things to say about your poem.
Let's start.
This was an amazing poem, I really loved reading this, The emotions behind your words were strong, and they came across to me making me feel the same as you did when you wrote this. I also love the choice of words, they are so strong and they came across to me really well, I couldn't have picked any better once.
I also love the story you are telling us, I really like poems like that. It's makes them so much more meaningful, and easier to relate to. In may case anyway.
Over all this was an amazing poem, and you should write more soon. I will be happy to read more. I'm glad I had a chance to read and share my opinion on your work. I hope you will post again soon. Have a great day or night.
Your friend
FlamingPhoenix
Reviewing with a fiery passion.
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