Published February 6, 2011
I need somebody to tell me that I matter
Because I feel so cold without the caress of words
Even words with no meaning
I need to hear that I exist
Because I'm slowly starting to evaporate.
I want you all to know that while you're reading this,
I'm crying and I am swimming in darkness.
Do you feel sorry for me yet?
I hope so, because your attention towards me is kindly requested.
Otherwise I don't know what I'm going to do,
I might actually have to become stronger, or something.
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I feel like hitting you with one of my few and fainting attention rays which radiate from my small mind. If you really feel this way, and i do too some times. It's best if you get yourself reading a good action adventure and let your mind wander on what you want to do. If you're having trouble holding on to exsistance then create one in writing. Once you've got who you want to be in your head. Become that person. odds are you will be exactly the same as now because you are already who you want to be. get my logic? lol. (attention ray fadinggg) HAVE A WONDERFUL DAY AND MAKE IT THE WAY YOU WANT IT BECAUSE YOU HAVE THE POWERRRR (some lady in the back ground "We got the powerr")
Hi there!!
If you made this a poem it would be AWESOME - I think. If you wrote this because you actually did want attention then PM me!! Let's get to know each other
Keep writing,
Alzora