Young Writers Society

Greetings Poet!

Beyond my beloved horizon, I'm setting sail into uncharted pages with an itch for adventure. Through binoculars, I spy with my little eye a lovely poem titled “Lost the sight of her eyes” that deserves a good review. Therefore without further ado, let’s begin.

Very first of all, I must say that you've written quite a beautiful poem here. It appears to be a short, heartfelt expression of love and longing. You use vivid imagery and metaphors to paint a clear picture of the tale that is being told throughout the poem.

In shadows, I lost the sight of her eyes

The opening line sets the tone for your poem. The speaker talks about losing someone, someone very important, someone they love. The word "shadows" suggests that the speaker lost that certain someone in darkness or a time of uncertainty, it symbolises the loss or absence of that 'someone'.

The speaker compares the disappearance of the 'person's eyes' to stars that "vanish in the darkened skies". Stars are the symbol of beauty and wonders, so their disappearance signifies the loss of something precious.
However, the speaker expresses that even though they may have lost their special person, the memory of them will live on and never fade away.

Your poem concludes by highlighting the importance of that special person in the speaker's dreams and memories. The poem perfectly captures the essence of enduring love and the way memories of a loved one can continue to hold a special place in one's heart.

Everything in all and all in everything, I enjoyed reading your lovely poem. Your use of metaphor and imagery adds depth and emotion to the poem's message, boosting the impact of the poem.

Feel free to check out Charmed by @Lullaby for some extra inspiration and ideas!

That's it, that's all.
Hoping the review has been of value to you!

With writer’s love,
Rose