Published September 25, 2005
One Last Kiss
Of all the word unspoken,
And all the thoughts unthought.
Of all the hearts it's broken,
And all the pain it's brought.
Of all the lies you told,
And all my shattered dreams.
Of all that will unfold,
And all I haven't seen.
Of all the time that's passed,
And all the tears I've cried.
This kiss will be our last,
Because our love has died.
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i like it, but the tital doesnt really show of the poem
lulu
This is truely great work!! who says a short poem can't be better than a long one? wow!!!
This is lovely. It's simple, but not lacking emotion, the rhyming works really well. I don't have anything bad to say about this, it's really pretty, and a little sad. Good work.