Breezy wrote:
"What I thought went up were the clouds"
I like the idea of thoughts going upward. I think it's really nice sounding. Did you mean "where", though? Were = "They were at the movies". Where = "Where are they?"
yep. thoughts and feelings going upward. like away
and no. where is wrong.
because the clouds were going up.
"what i thought went up were the clouds" is right. its what i meant and felt
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