Published October 2, 2008
Brown hair, brown eyes, the body of a goddess.
Tanned skin, cute face, long hair.
Just everything about her makes me want to smile.
But you see, the problem is
she'd never want me.
she'd never want a girl.
she wants a guy.
i know everyone can see.
Its just her lips, her eyes, her teeth, her hands, her feet!
everything.
I've never felt like this before.
I can't even describe it.
But i'm not going to try.
Because i have to keep it a secret.
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With this girl around I'm glad I'm a guy.
It was well constructed and pretty much to the point.
What else is there to say. Good job