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My first "her."

by alexis_love


Brown hair, brown eyes, the body of a goddess.
Tanned skin, cute face, long hair.
Just everything about her makes me want to smile.

But you see, the problem is
she'd never want me.
she'd never want a girl.
she wants a guy.
i know everyone can see.

Its just her lips, her eyes, her teeth, her hands, her feet!
everything.

I've never felt like this before.
I can't even describe it.
But i'm not going to try.
Because i have to keep it a secret.


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Fri Oct 03, 2008 1:07 am
playerj09 says...



With this girl around I'm glad I'm a guy.
It was well constructed and pretty much to the point.
What else is there to say. Good job





Obsessing over what you regret won't get you anywhere.
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