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I really love this poem and think that you worded it greatly! One small thing that I noticed, on the third line of the first stanza, the word life is capitalized. You might have meant for it to be, but I wanted to point it out just in case. I also loved your rhyme scheme, but i thought line b and d of the second stanza rhymed together a little awkwardly. Other than that, I think this is a wonderful, thoughtful, emotional poem. You are an amazing poet!