I rarely read poetry, but I saw the title and...
Well, there are two version to this story. The long one and the short one.
- 'That was a very good poem '
- And the long story?
- That was the long one.
- What's the short story then?
- 'Awesomeness!'
The only problem is spelling/grammar mistakes:
They dont know the mistake
They dont know the power they just unleashed.
‘Dont’ should be ‘don’t’.
It grows wihitn me
‘wihitn’ should be ‘within’
I will be back,so will he
You need a space after the comma.
Its not my falut.
‘Falut’ should be ‘fault’.
‘Its’ should be ‘it’s’.
imno longer human
‘Imno’ should be ‘I’m no’.
Im an alien in the eyes of Man.
‘Im’ should be ‘I’m’.
Over then them, it looks fine .
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