i agree with snoink, as i did not enjoy the second stanza as much as the other two. the first was absolutely beautiful. i love the image of rain on silver. the second one just lacked the pure beauty of the first. it wasn't bad, but it wasn't as striking. usually i'd just offer compliments if any other poet had scibbled this down, but i want you to be your best, zany. basically because your best is...amazing.
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