Hello there, human! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today!
Shalt we start?
Top Graham Cracker - Iris is alone in their bedroom with only the darkness to face. A demon with glowing red eyes and unfathomably sharp claws appears in their room, but surprisingly, it doesn’t want to harm Iris…
Slightly Burnt Marshmallow - If you would like, you could make Iris’ dialogue in italics, to show that they are whispering. That’s only if you want, though.
Chocolate Bar - I liked how the demon hugged Iris after it talked to them. It may have looked like a dangerous monster, but it was a friend. Goes to show that no one should judge a book by its cover.
Closing Graham Cracker - A cute, yet slightly spooky short story! (If it were a genre then it’d be one of my favorites). There are friends in those one least expects, even the demons.
Have a fantastic day/night!
Points: 121
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