Random Poems

[center][u]Pup[/u] Love that pup. Like she loves her ball. I said I love that pup. Like she loves her ball. I love to pet her in the mornings. Love to pet her. Soft and silky fur. [u]Pencils and Pens[/u] So much depends Upon A pencil or Pen Used to write And Make things I Love Where would we Be Without pencils and Pen DOG[/center] Canine, hound, mutt pup Dogs, little balls of fluff always cheer me up. [center]Pitbull[/center] What is the opposite of this pup? Only a poor breed people love to poorly talk up. [center]Death Is death life? Or is life the only life we live? Light What is the opposite of light? Maybe all the things that are not bright.[/center] Why I love Pitbulls - They are sweet and loving dogs. - No they don't eat kids. - The're fine with my cats. - Their jaws don't lock. - I have one. - They are beautiful dogs. - Their fur is short. - They love to play. - Their colours rangs from white to tri-colour - But most of all, because they are tough, and strong Duchesne Creeks, streams, rivers Streams, rivers, lakes Rivers, lakes, trees Lakes, trees, sage brush Trees, sage brush, bushes, Sage brush, bushes, flowers Bushes, flowers, campsites Flowers, camesites, fire pits Campsites, fire pits, hiking Firepits, hiking, fishing Hiking, fishing, trout Fishing, trout, squirrels Trout, squirrels, chipmunks Squirrels, chipmunks, eagles Chipmunks, eagles, birds Eagles, birds, snakes Birds, snakes, foxes Snakes, foxes, wolves Foxes, wolves, coyotes. ( My teacher loves this one.) [center]I Don't Understand... I don't understand... Why people leave others out Why people are judged for who they are Why people act with hatred But most of all... Why do we kill, when killing is not needed Why we fight for nothing that is right Why do people yell at others that cannot help what happened Why can't people just care Why I do understand is... Why sometimes we have to run Why the black birds fly high in the sky Why the trees grow high to touch the sky Why we all live and why we all have to die I am I am a writer and a dreamer I wonder why people hate I hear the calls of the birds as their wings beat the sky I see the drakness around me I want the people I have lost back in my arms I am a writer and a dreamer I pretend I'n not lost I feel the hard ground under my feet I touch the cool water in the stream I worry that people will never care I am a writer and a dreamer I understand why we all all live and why we all die I say that everything must be real, no matter how crazy I dream that people will one-day love what they have I try to do my best I hope the sun will rise I am a writer and a dreamer. Dark Dark Black, still Sleep, play read Midnight, moon, [color=yellow]sun, day Bright, happy Light[/color][/center] [b]Just because[/b] Just because I'm Dyslexic Doesn't mean I'm not smart Doesn't mean you can make fun of me It doesn't mean I can't read Just because I'm Dyslexic Doesn't mean I can't speak Don't judge me for my slepping It doesn't mean i see the letters all mixed Just because I'm Dyslexic Still tell me I can do it Can't wait to show you what I can do Just because I'm Dyslexic-- Doesn't mean you can't be my friend.
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Howdy there!

I think in order for someone to properly review this you really need to check trhough this and get rid of all the HTML.

In addition, it needs proper paragraphing. You label this as a series of poems... may we be able to distinguish between the poems?

Therefore it makes it impossible to comment on.

I managed to read the first two. I must admit they are random, and they're quite similar and repetitive. Try expanding them out a little?

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yubbies21
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Umm...mmm... What's the matter with this? I can hardly read it because of all the junk crowding it...

Yeah Wtf. I'm sorry I didn't know it would do this. I just copied it from my other site.



The beginning of wisdom is to call things by their right names.
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