Heya, Stranger! Trelose here.
First of all, I like how it addresses the topics and expresses my thoughts on the situation. Well done on that.
I'd like if it kept a consistent rhythm, personally, but still... It's well done. It's very clear on its topic while still making you think, and not a bunch of nothing.
Keep on writing, Stranger!
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