Hi, Fandomsnmusic here to do a review!
Wow. This poem is really cool! I admire the way you can make free verse work. Not everybody can, and you did a really great job making it work out! You did great with putting in punctuation for the poem and you have a great variety of word choice.
Although the poem itself is great, the end seems a bit rushed and I think you could make it a little longer and not seem like it all came to a stop too suddenly. Just my opinion of course, but I think you could make it better.
You don't have any spelling errors, and all your grammar is good, so all I have to say is great job and keep up the good work!
Never stop writing,
fandomsnmusic
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