Published May 30, 2009
Well done, your an amazing writer 
This poem has depth and you stick to the tread all the way through.
There's nothing here to criticize which is really fantastic
I'm looking forward to reading a few more of your poems,
Well done again,
Wildwood
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I really liked the imagery you used here, and even though there was no rhyme, the flow was exceptional.
Oh, and the way you used your exclamations was brilliant!!
Gold star of course!
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Wildwood, to Reply to a topic, you have to click 'Post Reply'. You accidentally hit the New Post button. But! Thanks for commenting on a piece, or trying to!