I had you, once before.
Once before, you were mine.
We've been through everything.
We've seen the best, we've seen the worst, and still we shine.
I knew you, once before.
Once before, you knew me.
I remember a past with us.
All the things I know, and won't let go, are bittersweet.
I held you, once before.
Once before, I kept you near.
The smell of you, lingered long.
Seeing you each day, it chased away, all of my fears.
And you are mine, once again.
Once again, I have you.
Everything, has made us strong.
Whatever we face, we can erase, and keep on through.
You know me, once again!
Now, again, we are as one.
We will make new memories.
We'll make our rules, we'll act like fools, and we'll have fun.
I keep you near, once again.
Once again, I can hold you.
Both our scents, will mingle long.
Everytime I think, of you and me, I feel anew.
So here we are, once again.
Once again, my love is strong.
We'll be together, now and forever, we'll carry on.
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wew. i am so touched with every lines.
i can relate to this
so that's why i love this song
haha
last question
do you have chords in guitar of your composition?
Hey Its Giselle,
This was really heart warming. It have a nice flow to people ears and it shows a deeper feeling. Keep up the good work.
*Sniff* *Sniff*
I don't know why but this makes me cry... in a good way. I like the way it flows and sounds so pretty to the ear.
This was my favorite line!
Keep writing, (please!)
~FW~