United In Unhallowed Grace

by UFO

  • Poetry

Published May 23, 2012

In Poetic Nonsense

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Unfolding her carnal desires to me
With tempting eyes she does receive
A hunter of the night, devil's whore
May her cursed beauty hunt me forever

We embrace the madness gathered as one
Mourning dead passion... she comes to me
A fate awaits us in the night
In the ruins of creation we will unite

She comes to me - a shining beacon
Confused by the sensual innovation
Passion... towards image of mortal evil
Passion... embraced by the image of united death

The enigma lies broken
Searching for those precious moments
Reaching for a higher of existence
Like a newborn migrant in the void

I am smitten by forbidden fruit
Possessed by moments of dark splendour
To walk the nightmare terrains forever
The enigma lies broken

Possessed by moments of dark splendour
To walk the nightmare terrains forever
United with new unhallowed grace
This cursed beauty hunts me forever
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sockmonkey
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sockmonkey wrote a review Review · Jun 24, 2012

good job!This is a very good poem.You could call it a seductive work I guess, I don't' know.There really is nothing to fix.I do like the romantic theme you have going maybe you could describe this girls appearance a little more?Keep up the good work the enigmaliesbroken sincerely, sockmonkey.



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