huh. Well seeing that all of my favorite poetry critics have already hit this, I probably won't say a lot they haven't.
Punctuation, please. Poetry & Punctuation
Also, this article might help you: Emotional Poetry.
Like Brad said, this is real listy. Consider writing about an actual event. Readers can get into events/scenes a lot better than they can get into descriptions of emotions. I'm not even entirely sure what the heck this was about, and I can't relate to it. Write with characters, whether it is you just speaking to someone else or... something.
And I'm sure this was said already but, it's good to pound things into peoples brains: Read poetry.
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