Published February 15, 2010
From the remnant ash I will return once more,
To the way of the Phoenix I do implore
That which is Life shall burn so bright,
A splendor to all caught in its sight
And from this place of Nature do I even exist,
By its sheer desire do I yet persist
Take heed to the words so spoken
Take heed, and listen close
For it is always in the search within
That One can be truly awoken
From the remnant ash,
I will return once more
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Awoken:
v. A past participle of awake.
a⋅wake- verb, a⋅woke or a⋅waked, a⋅woke or a⋅waked or a⋅wo⋅ken, a⋅wak⋅ing, adjective
–verb (used with object), verb (used without object)
1. to wake up; rouse from sleep: I awoke at six with a feeling of dread.
2. to rouse to action; become active: His flagging interest awoke.
3. to come or bring to an awareness; become cognizant (often fol. by to): She awoke to the realities of life.
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Hi, I liked your poetry. That One can be truly awoken(awaken)