Travelling far and of a great time I stop to reflect
In the moment passing I find rest in watching life pass
Nature grows and dies in every instant
Born again anew and lost forever to the void
In the days past I find contempt with the restless soul
Harmony and discord exists ever constant
Clairvoyance remains always within oneself
In the years proceeded I contend myself with Nature in itself
Purity is that which has always an unchangeable force
Simplicity within the chaos that realms all
And as I near that final moment of my reality amongst this world
Tranquility fills my mind and I am at peace with everything
The flame of life always rises once from the ashes of the end
Always burning ever brighter and ever stronger
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Wow this was really really good
Your use of diction is exquisite. Great job!
Keep writing!
<3 Sara.