The End Ward

by Swires

Published December 10, 2006

The End Ward


The frothy liquor burbled,
Synthing surely into mead,
Gurgling, sucking, wrenching,
As the old nurse said.

She was a women of passion,
Medicines sliding through her hands,
Looking in horror as he slipped away.
The mead brewed a storm.

Then the old nurse silenced,
No more burbling came,
And the wrenching stopped.
Instead, a cold scream that purged the froth
Chilling it into a solid cavern,
It trapped him, cursed him, purged him.
Just as the old nurse left,
Another froth gurgled,
A froth of tears over a stony basin.

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Swires
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Swires commented Comment · Dec 22, 2006

Anyone else, This is the thrid poem I've written so feel free to rip it to shreds.

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Don Quixote commented Comment · Dec 12, 2006

Wow, that was absolutely chilling! Isn't "burble" great word?



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