Taunting me.

by SwallowedByInsanity

  • Poetry
  • Romantic

Published February 29, 2012

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The insanity at my fingertips is taunting
It’s poisonous residue
So cold on my skin
It’s positively enticing
 
Do I dare have a taste?
Or keep lunacy at bay?
The words tattooed upon my face
Label me with such cruel disgrace
 
Seeping, seeping, seeping,
Between the cracks and into my bloodstream
Forget the past, throw your head back,
And scream.
 
And there you are,
Just as you have always been,
Taunting me with your poison.
 
But do I dare… have a taste?
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harshita3chaarag wrote a review Review · Feb 29, 2012

hey... So I'm just going to give you a quick review... I thinks it's pretty good...but you know..there are a few errors... Mostly.. it isn't flowing.. and did you try to write with a rhyme scheme? Because it seems that you were but it isn't really there..I think it'll be loads better without the rhyme scheme.. Overall I love the theme of it and I'm absolutely positive that if you work on..Voila you've got a masterpiece!!
Harshita:)



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