This poem is beautiful. It captures the pain and confusion of struggling to believe. The lack of capitalization is obvious, but if it's the poet's style I don't think there's any problem with it. The imagery towards the end is amazing and surreal and makes this piece even more meaningful. Actually, the overall use of words, descriptive adjectives and action verbs all come together to convey the emotions of the poem. The continuous theme of silence adds consistency and meaning as well. I really like this poem and appreciate the way you were able to portray the emotions behind it so well. Great job!
Points: 156
Reviews: 3
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