Young Writers Society

I'm a little late on seeing this, but I thoroughly enjoyed it! I loved the flow of the words especially. Great job!!

Really deep morbid feel to it that makes you want to read more than once! I think you did a good job and overall it was a good read! Keep up the good work

You could start a revolution.

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I really like how this poem was written.

Stanza One:
I like how you talked about how she shown exuberance to the world. And how the sunshine shined on her hair. Then I like how you wrote in Italics "She stopped, eventually."
But to make that more grammatically more correct, use "Eventually she stopped."
Other than that this stanza was pretty good.

Stanza Two:
I relate to this stanza. I had a bunny who was very energetic and happy. Recently she passed away. I do miss her yes.

Stanza Three
Holy macaroni!
I love this stanza. It cut deep. I am pretty sure you wrote about how I feel all the time haha. So like I really like this one. Probably the most.


Okay that is all! I hope to read more from you soon. Happy writing!

Heh. You couldn't have expressed it better~ I can feel the indignation in your words. Thumbs up.

Okay, for something so light, and such a dark title, that is... Fantastic! I can't really relate to the title, but!
It's very playful, yet retains a dark premise, in a very sensible-nonsense kind of way.

I once had a cat.
The cat would run around the house
clawing furniture and expressing enjoyment.
It died, eventually.